無錫新航道雅思小作文技巧（一）5月4日真題，柱圖加餅圖的小作文該咋寫?

隔了一場線圖，再次遭遇“不同年份且不同地區(qū)”的柱圖，還混進(jìn)一個(gè)餅圖湊熱鬧……

2019年5月4日雅思小作文題目

國內(nèi)(A類)：柱圖+餅圖

高分范文及解析

如何避免“機(jī)械羅列數(shù)據(jù)”的寫法?

寫出數(shù)據(jù)背后的事實(shí)，用“解讀”(不是探討原因)的方式去寫“數(shù)據(jù)體現(xiàn)出來的事實(shí)”

【重要一】對于數(shù)據(jù)的省略要“大膽”?？脊俨皇峭ㄟ^寫作的文本來畫圖，而是審核寫作文本是否符合圖中的信息和意義。
【重要二】避免“機(jī)械羅列數(shù)據(jù)”的寫法：寫出數(shù)據(jù)背后的事實(shí)，用“解讀”(不是探討原因)的方式去寫“數(shù)據(jù)體現(xiàn)出來的事實(shí)”。
給各位“烤鴨”打個(gè)樣兒(僅看body部分)：

The distinction between Latin America and the other two regions – Africa and the slightly bigger exporter East Asia – was clear, as Latin America sold to the international market far more tonnage of bananas than did the other two regions. In the two years, the respective sales were 5.5 million and 10.5 million tons, and they could be more than ten times of the sales in the other two regions.
Most conspicuously, when a ton of bananas are sold at the retail price,farmers make a mere 4 percent of the price, far less than the profit margins, which were more than four times of the production cost. Another small part of the price was the export cost, and tax, cross-border transportation and cross-border transportation accounted for moderate portions. The rest 35 percent is cost by distribution and retail.
注意題目中的主題詞匯(比如本文中的exporter, sold to the international market, profit margins, cross-border transportation, cross-border transportation)也是有替換的空間的。

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