雅思（數(shù)據(jù)型）小作文的考核思路你都理解了嗎？

本次推送 2018年小作文示范兩篇，幫助考生理解雅思（數(shù)據(jù)型）小作文的兩個(gè)考核思路。

2018年4月21日雅思小作文題目

國(guó)內(nèi)（A類）：柱圖

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The table given shows the total number of cruise passengers in the UK in two years, which are 1995 and 2003. The bars are an illustration of the breakdown of the two years’ numbers by age. 

There were roughly 3,000 more passengers in 2003 than in 1995, when the number was 99,575. ← 比較級(jí)是典型的體現(xiàn)比較概念的句型。分組：以藍(lán)黃柱的高低 → Except in the 25-34 group and the 35-44 group, the year of 2003 witnessed greater numbers of passengers in the other age groups, 根據(jù)主句的信息繼續(xù)寫(xiě) → and the group consisting of people aged under 24 is noteworthy, as passengers in 2003, whose number is 10,000, are nearly twice as many as passengers in 1995. ← 一篇有一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句即可。A noticeable gap can also be found in the next two older groups; however, there was an opposite case that the year of 1995 received obviously more passengers than the year of 2003. In addition, older passengers were more than their younger counterparts in both of the two years. The greater numbers were significant in the two oldest groups, with the number of passengers surging [surge] to as large as 23,000 in the 55-64 group and 35,000 in the 65-and-plus group.

1. 內(nèi)容注意：數(shù)據(jù)的 分組 和 取舍。

2. 語(yǔ)法和句型注意：全篇的 不同的狀語(yǔ)形式 和 非限定性定語(yǔ)從句 的交替使用；主語(yǔ)的多樣性。

3. 詞匯注意：表示程度的形容詞和副詞。

2018年1月20日雅思小作文題目

國(guó)內(nèi)（A類）：折線圖

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The lines in the two graphs are illustrations of the visits made by French and American vacationers and business visitors to the UK throughout a year.

In terms of the holiday visits, the general pattern is that the UK received markedly more French vacationers' visits than those of American vacationers. ←   表語(yǔ)從句。寫(xiě)作步驟：上一句總寫(xiě)宏觀后開(kāi)始細(xì)化： With the number of French vacationers' visits increasing faster, ← 獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語(yǔ)表方式。 the gap keeping widening during the first quarter. It stabilized in the next two quarters, and the third quarter witnessed the respective peaks of the two numbers of visits – 3 million (m.) and 1.7m. Afterwards, both numbers of visits slid [slide] quickly to the original levels (0.5m and 0.7m). 

Likewise, French travelers made more visits for the business purpose than American visitors; however, the numbers of visits made by the two groups had identical trends. 寫(xiě)作步驟：在既然提及trends,那就把trends說(shuō)明白： To be specific, despite the slip during the middle of the year, both numbers increased, from 0.2m to 0.48m and 0.1m to 0.3m respectively. Meanwhile, it is noteworthy that the difference was within a narrow range of 0.1m to 0.2m constantly over the year.

Overall, the year saw that the UK received more holiday visits than the business visits and that the French made more visits than Americans. ← 賓語(yǔ)從句，注意平行。

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