稍作文“章”第八期 | 雅思寫作：weekly送你一套題（1月31日，雪）

Task 1

 

The table below shows the number of people having private cars in every 1,000 people in six countries in 2009, 2010 and 2011.

既可以用“比較”法來寫作，也可以用“（線性）變化”法來寫作：因為時間是連續(xù)的

推薦：按照“（線性）變化”法來寫作

信息加工，確定寫作內(nèi)容：

1） 一路升：the US, the UK, China, Germany：China最突出（2010年的300到2011年的500），其他國家穩(wěn)定升，在三年里都是minimum；

2） 升了降：France, Canada

3） 同時有“比較”：the US在三年里都是maximum。

 

[Introduction] The table presents information about the ownership of private cars in every 1,000 people in six countries in three years – 2009, 2010 and 2011.

 

[Body] China was most noteworthy among the countries where private car ownership kept increasing during the three-year period. In the US, the UK and Germany, the growth was steady, either 50 or 100 cars a year. In China, there was an annual increase of 100 cars between 2009 and 2010, and the number spiked to 500 in 2011. In addition, China is noticeable also because its car ownership was lower than that of any other country throughout the three years.  

 

Every 1,000 French people owned 600, 650 and 550 cars in the three years, and the fluctuating car ownership also happened in Canada, where the number varied significantly between the years, surging [surge] from 400 to 800 and then sliding [slide] to 700. It is also  that all of the three years witnessed that the US had the highest car ownership. 【主語的頻繁變化；語法現(xiàn)象的多樣（Grammatical Range）；表示變化/趨勢的動詞（及對應(yīng)的名詞）】

 

[Conclusion] 略

Task 2

In many countries, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so it is logical that men and women should share the housework tasks equally.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

 

[Introduction]

 

Doing housework should not be exclusively females’ department [習(xí)語性表達]. Instead, men should also roll up their sleeves [形象的表達] rather than sit in the couch [形象的表達]. However, the proposed equality in amount is unreasonable.

 

[Body] There have been increasing numbers of women who do not take being a housewife for granted. They are full-time employees, who find it difficult to juggle their careers with taking care of their households. At this point, it is fair that the husbands take some of the responsibility. However, does this mean that the wife and husband share the chores evenly? [故意提問/設(shè)問] The answer is an obvious “no”. [短句給出一個方向，具體關(guān)于“為什么”的信息后面用長句說明] A wife and her husband are likely to have different timetables, although they both work full time, and the different arrangements hardly permit the couple to divide the household in equal halves. Therefore, if the male works longer hours, it is reasonable for the wife to expect her husband to do some and unreasonable to expect the man to do the same.

 

In addition, although the wife also earns a salary, she may follow a 9-5 timetable. The husband, however, are likely to work overtime and bring home a bigger paycheck. If the economic contribution is unbalanced and the imbalance is acceptable, why is the unequal allocation of housework unacceptable? [故意提問/反問] As a matter of fact,as long as a global balance – that the man brings home more bread and butter while the woman washes more clothes and dishes [不是真的只是“洗衣洗碗”，而是泛指家務(wù)] – may be maintained, the proposed equality is unnecessary.

 

[Conclusion] 

In light of the above, housework should not be done solely by women. However, it may go too far if we expect men and women share the work equally. My conviction is strong that it cannot be bent by any opposition.

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新航道國際教育集團寫作學(xué)科帶頭人，新航道南京學(xué)校雅思托福寫作學(xué)科帶頭人，閱讀寫作鉆石級團隊。澳大利亞拉籌伯大學(xué)碩士，原澳大利亞EAL教師，師從雅思考官，并與其共事多年。8年雅思教學(xué)經(jīng)驗，以及多年的北美考試研究使其對各類留學(xué)語言考試了如指掌，獨創(chuàng)一套專門解決中國學(xué)生寫作障礙的行之有效的教學(xué)體系，幫助了近千名學(xué)生突破寫作低分瓶頸之后更不斷進步取得寫作高分，成功步入國外大學(xué)。在教學(xué)過程中邏輯清晰并且思維開闊，信手拈來地引經(jīng)據(jù)典而令學(xué)生折服。

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