《劍13》Test 2 雅思大作文解析及范文題目:
“Some people think that people nowadays have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
”審題關鍵詞:too, 貶義,含義是excessive,redundant
高分范文
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Modern society is characterized by [“以xxx為特點”] material abundance [“物質(zhì)方面的豐富”] and many lifestyle choices. Although many people think that they are spoilt for choices [習語,“選擇太多以至于無從選擇”], I tend to think otherwise.
02
Admittedly, stores offer a wide range of commodities for people to choose from; however, what a shopper [語境下具體的人群,而不寬泛稱為people/person] can actually afford is only a limited number of them. In addition, although job vacancies are plentiful, what an applicant[語境下具體的人群,而不寬泛稱為people/person] is qualified or suited for is often only a few. The same principle applies to [“同樣的原則適用于”]one’s personal life. Many single males or females [語境下具體的人群,而不寬泛稱為people/person] may have the misconception that an ideal partner must be selected out of many candidates; as a matter of fact, they may never meet that many people or deserve many of them. In brief, one can be confined by [“受限于”] his or her capability, having [伴隨狀語] not too many choices. [特殊的段落結構:段落中心句在段落最后]
03
Another reason is that the existing variety of choices actually falls behind the diversity of individual preferences. In other words, no matter how numerous today’s options are, the diverse personal desires are more. Those people who argue for the redundancy of choices adopt a rather narrow perspective and misconceive of the plenty of options as excessive existents. For example, when they choose a particular product, they may meanwhile consider other options unnecessary. However, taking a broad view, one may find that those seemingly excess options are popular among particular demographics and that there are many people’s needs that have not been met yet because what is available for people to choose from is still short. Hence, how could we think that the choices are too many?
04
In conclusion, people nowadays do not have many choices. Conversely, the options available are limited for both internal [“內(nèi)在的/內(nèi)部的”] and external [“外在的/外部的”] factors.
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