6月2日雅思大作文真題：網(wǎng)絡(luò)社交的優(yōu)劣勢

2018年6月2日雅思大作文題目

“Many people today prefer socializing online to spending time with friends in local community. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?”

解析&審題

本周是一個大家都非常熟悉的話題。我們現(xiàn)在喜歡在網(wǎng)上交友，卻不愿意和鄰居聊天，這個現(xiàn)象是好還是壞呢？

有些同學(xué)拿到這個題目，可能非常開心，馬上就會想到網(wǎng)上聊天的種種壞處，比如傷害身體，不安全，而且交不到真正的朋友，等等。也可能有很多同學(xué)想到網(wǎng)上交友的種種好處，比如節(jié)約時間，提升效率，不受時間空間限制，等等。

這樣的作文就是典型的“一邊倒”結(jié)構(gòu)，就是只討論“網(wǎng)上交友”的好處/壞處，但即使同時討論“網(wǎng)上交友”的好處和壞處，就本題而言，也是不夠的，因為沒有涉及到題目給出的另外一個關(guān)鍵信息“在當(dāng)?shù)厣鐓^(qū)和朋友一起度過”。

仔細(xì)審題后，我們會發(fā)現(xiàn)，本題其實需要考生比較“網(wǎng)上交往”和“與朋友在線下交往”兩種與朋友交往的方式的。

因此，無論我們采取哪一種行文結(jié)構(gòu)（一邊倒或者雙邊討論），我們都需要涉及這兩個方面，如果僅涉及“網(wǎng)上交往”，在task response方面就是不完整的。也就是說，當(dāng)考生在論述“網(wǎng)上交往”的好處或者壞處時，一定要在與“線下交往”的比較中來進行才可以，沒有比較，這個作文就是沒有完整回答題目的問題，會被扣分。

以下是本題高分范文。

老師筆記 01

When it comes to socializing with friends, online interaction is a highly convenient tool, but this does not mean that face-to-face interaction is becomingsomething of the past. Regarding socializing online with friends, there are clear advantages and disadvantages in comparison with face-to-face interaction.

當(dāng)談到到與朋友的社交活動時，在線互動是一個非常方便的工具，但這并不意味著面對面的互動已經(jīng)成為過去。相比于面對面互動，與朋友網(wǎng)上交往有明顯的優(yōu)勢和劣勢。

解析

（1）本范文沒有過多的背景介紹，直接提出話題并亮出自己的觀點：兩種社交方法各有利弊。這決定了本文即將采取“雙邊討論”的論證結(jié)構(gòu)。

（2）when it comes to... 當(dāng)談到......（后接名詞或動名詞）

（3）something of the past 過去的事物

（4）regarding 關(guān)于

（5）in comparison with... 與......相比

02

For one thing, socializing online enables people tomaintain friendships that might otherwise be lost. This may refer to someone who has moved away, someone who becomes ill, or someone who is unable to meet face to face for whatever reason.For another, many people turn to the Internet as a tool with which to socialize with their friends because it is not time or place sensitive. In other words, people can communicate with their friends any time and any place. This is particularly important when they want to tell their friends about something very urgent. Meeting friends up in the local community, however, does not enjoy these advantages.

首先，網(wǎng)上社交可以讓人們保持那些不用此法就可能失去的友誼。這可能包括已經(jīng)搬走的人，生病的人，或出于各種原因不能見面的人。其次，許多人求助于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)作為與朋友交往的工具，因為網(wǎng)絡(luò)對時間和地點都不敏感。換句話說，人們可以在任何時間、任何地點與朋友交流。當(dāng)他們想告訴朋友一些非常緊急的事情時，這一點特別重要。然而，在當(dāng)?shù)厣鐓^(qū)與朋友見面并不享有這些優(yōu)勢。

解析

（1）本段討論網(wǎng)絡(luò)社交的兩個優(yōu)勢（與不能見面的人保持友誼；網(wǎng)絡(luò)社交不受時空限制）。注意本段最后一句，就是明確網(wǎng)絡(luò)社交的這兩個優(yōu)勢是與線下交往相比較而言的。

（2）for one thing..., for another... 首先......; 其次......

（3）maintain friendship 保持友誼；維護友誼

（4）for whatever reason 無論出于何種原因

（5）sensitive 敏感的

（6）urgent 緊急的

03

For all the advantages that online socializing has to offer, it can never really replace human contact. The basic reason behind is that humans are social animals and they love getting around with people, particularly with friends. Nothing can beat the feelings of walking together, playing games, doing sports, going for picnics and excursions or short trips. There are times when friends must shunsmartphones for a while, do away with interacting on virtual social networking platforms, and get down to real things in life, face to face. To build friendships, indeed, the quantity of digital interaction does not equal the quality of face-to-face interaction.

盡管在線社交有這些優(yōu)勢，但它永遠(yuǎn)無法真正取代人的接觸，這背后的根本原因是人類是社會性的動物，他們喜歡與人在一起，尤其是朋友。沒有什么能勝過一起散步，玩游戲，做運動，野餐，郊游或短途旅行的感覺。有些時候，朋友必須暫時躲避手機，不在虛擬社交平臺上進行互動，而是面對面地處理生活中的真實問題。的確，為了建立友誼，數(shù)字交往的數(shù)量無法比肩面對面互動的質(zhì)量。

解析

（1）本段討論線下交往的優(yōu)勢，采用說理的方式。人是社會性動物，喜歡和朋友一起，然后舉例說明人類在一起喜歡做那些活動，最后總結(jié)（網(wǎng)絡(luò)社交數(shù)量雖多，卻不及面對面交往的質(zhì)量）。

（2）for all 盡管；雖然（= in spite of)

（3）replace 取代

（4）beat 勝過；打擊

（5）shun 避免（= avoid）

（6）do away with 扔掉；拋棄

（7）virtual 虛擬的

（8）get down to... 認(rèn)真做......

（9）quantity 數(shù)量

04

As a conclusion, with clear advantages and disadvantages of the two modes of interaction, friends can alternatively socialize with one another face to face and via the Internet. Socializing online, however popular it can be, cannot play the same role as human contact. Therefore, face-to-face interaction will never go out of fashion.

綜上所述，由于這兩種互動方式各有優(yōu)缺點，朋友們可以選擇面對面或通過互聯(lián)網(wǎng)進行社交活動。無論在線社交有多流行，都沒有與人類接觸一樣的功能。因此，面對面的互動永遠(yuǎn)不會過時。

解析

（1）本段為結(jié)論段，再次明確重申觀點。好的結(jié)尾段應(yīng)該包括兩個內(nèi)容：一是對前文的總結(jié)，二是適當(dāng)?shù)难由?。因此，好作文的結(jié)尾段通常都是2-3句話組成。

（2）alternatively 有選擇地

（3）via 通過

（4）go out of fashion 過時

本場考試范文

When it comes to socializing with friends, online interaction is a highly convenient tool, but this does not mean that face-to-face interaction is becoming something of the past. Regarding socializing online with friends, there are clear advantages and disadvantages in comparison with face-to-face interaction.

For one thing, socializing online enables people to maintain friendships that might otherwise be lost. This may refer to someone who has moved away, someone who becomes ill, or someone who is unable to meet face to face for whatever reason. For another, many people turn to the Internet as a tool with which to socialize with their friends because it is not time or place sensitive. In other words, people can communicate with their friends any time and any place. This is particularly important when they want to tell their friends about something very urgent. Meeting friends up in the local community, however, does not enjoy these advantages.

For all the advantages that online socializing has to offer, it can never really replace human contact. The basic reason behind is that humans are social animals and they love getting around with people, particularly with friends. Nothing can beat the feelings of walking together, playing games, doing sports, going for picnics and excursions or short trips. There are times when friends must shun smartphones for a while, do away with interacting on virtual social networking platforms, and get down to real things in life, face to face. To build friendships, indeed, the quantity of digital interaction does not equal the quality of face-to-face interaction.

As a conclusion, with clear advantages and disadvantages of the two modes of interaction, friends can alternatively socialize with one another face to face and via the Internet. Socializing online, however popular it can be, cannot play the same role as human contact. Therefore, face-to-face interaction will never go out of fashion.

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